Most screenwriting books are written by writers who aren't industry professionals. Or if they were industry professional screenwriters, their experience is so old its no longer relevant to the way movies are written and produced today.
I earn a living to this very day as a professional industry screenwriter.
I've written a series of books on screenwriting that I believe will be very insightful for those looking to learn the trade or for those looking to step up to another level.
The first book -- 20 BASIC RULES for Professional ScreenWriting -- has just been published!
Here is an EXCERPT FROM THE BOOK --
BASIC RULE #10
At the
end of the first act, a “Plot Spin” needs to occur within the framework of the
storyline. The point of this screenwriting technique is to “spin” the main
storyline in a different direction. this plot spin often times changes the
direction of the narrative in a surprising way that excites the audience
experiencing the first act.
With this rule, we’re at the part of the
screenplay structure I believe is the cornerstone to great storytelling in
movies. I also believe it is the key narrative component for a teleplay, novel,
or any “narrative” format where the storyteller has the goal of deepening the engagement
of the audience.
Frankly, this is the creative step that
usually begins to separate those who write and those who write stories where a
reader wants more. It is also the fundamental step that separates those who
create professionally… and those who end up creating for family and friends.
Even veteran screenwriters mess this
step up (or skip it altogether) and the screenplay they’ve authored takes a
beating when it is read by industry professionals. Others who read the script
(or see the movie) won’t be able to articulate why they are responding
negatively to a story after the first act, but more times than not their
misgivings are based on the lack of plot spin (or a bad plot spin).
This is the crucial step to laying out a
plot that will help your audience double down in their interest on the story
you’ve set up in the first act. In the three-act structure, the first act plot
spin occurs at the end of the first act, and is a calculated narrative
development that takes the plot established up to that point, and “spins” the
story off in a different direction. The mark of a great first act plot spin is
how clever, original, or expectant the narrative has changed directions.
Consider a protagonist who is working
for the Roman Empire as a loyal centurion, but then, after the plot spin, loses
his career, family and land because of a change in leadership. This first act
plot spin in Gladiator (screenplay by
David Franzoni and Josh Logan) occurs after the character of Maximus performs
heroically in a battle against the last Germanic tribe, but then resists the
will of the new emperor who takes over after Marcus Aurelius has died (actually
killed by the same man who has become the new emperor).
The first act plot spin is a narrative “game changer.”
The mark of a good first act plot spin
is one where the previous pages have set it up, perhaps even hinted at the
possibilities of this new direction, but haven’t necessarily given it away. The
key as the writer is to establish such a well-written first act that the
audience is open to several possible ways the story could end up going, but
that when the first act plot spin is finally revealed the direction is more
than just consistent with what preceded it; the storyline has now gone off in a
direction that is potentially exciting, intriguing, and engaging for the
audience.
Many screenwriters fail to come up with
a screenplay that has a quality first act plot spin and also fail to realize
how important this omission is to the way their script will be received.
Scripts without a first act plot point start with the setup – the setting and
the introduction of the main character – but then proceed forward, usually in a
narratively “linear” way, with the same setup and main character doing exactly
what has been foreshadowed in the first act.
An example of this kind of shallow storytelling
can usually be observed by watching a “Lifetime” cable movie from the 90s. The
first act in those productions usually consist of a protagonist falling in love
with some guy with the hint of danger introduced before the first commercial
break. And by the second act the heroine ends up stuck in a marriage with an
abusive husband. The rest of the narrative is about her surviving the turmoil
of an abusive relationship.
The first act plot spin is meant to
“re-engage” the audience in a way that becomes even more profound than the
beginning of the story. This is the goal, no matter the genre of the story.
In Star
Wars: A New Hope (screenplay by George Lucas), the main character, Luke
Skywalker, is introduced along with many other characters (Princess Leia, Obi
Wan Kanobi, and Darth Vader) in the initial setup of the story. During the
first act we discover that the universe has been torn apart by a galactic civil
war, but unfortunately for Luke he’s on the sidelines working on his uncle’s
farm.
Then, at the end of the first act, comes
the first act plot spin – the discovery of a droid by Luke, which pushes his
character to accept the mission of fighting for the rebel cause. His meeting
with Obi wan Kenobi and the slaughter of his adoptive parents only makes his
decision to fight for the rebel cause a mission he can’t refuse.
The first act plot spin is a narrative
“game changer.” It re-energizes the story and prepares the audience for what
the movie is really all about. A screenwriter must get this step right in
laying out their storyline. If one fails here, an industry professional,
(producer, studio executive) experienced in telling commercial stories, will be
able to immediately spot the flaw in the screenplay.
The second book in the series -- 19 TECHNIQUES for Professional ScreenWriting will be published next week!
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